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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands 
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 ***  Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Ah, Titia. Beautiful pictures and beautiful Haiku. Shenachie |
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Muys Member
since 2002-04-06
Posts 389The Netherlands |
I need one word ~~~*Beautyful*~~~  Mamma |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
I especially love the visuals with these haikus Tita!!  Well done!! And do you think Nan will really forgive me for getting the classroom all wet with just a few apples? Maybe I should send her some "watermelon" too!! hehe..Tammy |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
You already know ... I LOVE THESE !! So very, very well done~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
WOW!!!! Beautiful, just beautiful. Hugs, Marti |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Hi friends, thanks for your replies. I've learned in the meantime (from my privat English teacher) that you refer to the Sun as a he and not a she and 'speaking loud' is not correct either, it should be 'loudly'. So the last line should be: He's speaking loudly That's the charm of having your own English teacher  No, I'm not saying who it is, otherwise you all go and use him.Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Pure magnificence Sunset's unearthly vision Only eyes speak truth |
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