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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2002-06-13 06:09 AM


They're sore and ther're tired, been raked over coals.
Like me , they're half-baked, some-one call Dr. Scholls!
On needles and pins, at this juncture I'd say,
indeed acupuncture might help them some way.

They've Marched into April, foot-soldiers who run,
in every direction back where they've begun,
to turn on each other(which does not bode well)
They're "Pun"gent(oh brother, now that really smells!)

They're down and they're dirty, they're lean and they're mean.
They ain't very purty like some that I've seen.
But these are my feet watch them rise like the South,
If I can just keep thewm out of my mouth!

© Copyright 2002 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-06-13 04:19 PM


Doc~
LOL ...
I'd walk a moc in your milecasins~


You've got me laughing out loud for sure~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Dr.Moose1
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2 posted 2002-06-16 08:58 AM


Dear Marge,
Thanks. Glad you got a chuckle out of it.
Doc

Bridget Shenachie
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3 posted 2002-06-18 12:33 PM


Hi Doc!

Finally somebody said something about feet that I can understand.  LOL.

Shenachie

Kit McCallum
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4 posted 2002-06-18 06:37 AM


LOL!  Wonderful Doc! I loved this introduction to your feet!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Not A Poet
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5 posted 2002-06-18 10:56 AM


ROFLMAO. Thanks Doc. Thoroughly enjoyed.

Pete

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Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 2002-06-18 07:40 PM


Very funny, Dr, Scholl, I mean Dr moose. You've got me giggling again. You and marge  got my spirits high
Liz

Dr.Moose1
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7 posted 2002-06-20 05:18 PM


Bridget,
Thanks.Some days it seems like I've got one in the grave, the other on a banana peel, and then when I think things couldn't get much worse, Balladeer shows up and yanks the rug out from under me!( I don't know how he missed this one
Doc

Kit,
Thanks. My first rule is " anything for a laugh " The rest of them I just break
anytime I feel like it.
Doc

Pete,
Thank you. Please see above comment about rules.
Doc

Elizabeth,
Thank you. Always happy to oblige ( not always able, but , always happy )
Doc

Nan
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8 posted 2002-06-21 08:56 PM


Doc Moose is really Doc Shill?.. I mean Scholl?? Or is Doc Scholl really Doc Moose.. in comfy anapestic/dactylic moccasins??

I think we've created a pterrible monster here...

Dr.Moose1
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9 posted 2002-06-21 09:39 PM


Dear Teach,
I get the feeling I'm being followed here.
I hope you're not one of those stalkers Mom warned me about.( Geesh! I'm just a young moose, not some wisened ancient master of poetry like someone who will remain nameless!)Thanks.
Doc

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