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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Ragged Rhyme Some have said my rhymes are ragged, That my meter’s often jagged, Even claimed my themes portray a shallow core – Words of modest inspiration – Therefore, without hesitation, I should give up writing now and evermore. I protest with indignation Heartless words of denigration, Though it’s true I have no skill at writing verse. Poetry can be quite daunting And I find my poems wanting Just to have a muse a little less perverse. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
no Pete, they say YOU are ragged.  actually, i'm always happy to see when you write something new, as you always put your mind in it... as to your rhyme... well, that's evil, but we all have faults.  |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Yeek! Where did Chris come from? Ok, I see... Pete's ragged, Chris is jagged... and poor ol' me is just shagged! As aslways... great write Pete! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Just accept it - You're plain and simply "Not a Poet".. and that you shall be forevermore...  |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Thanks you ladies ~~bowing~~ oh, and you too Chris. Pete |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Pete, Nice twist here, not as easy as it looks ( "jagged" or not ). Doc |
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