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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Attention from the point, distract. Was Humpty cracked before he fell ? The odds are that the deck is stacked. "Bo Peep was prob'ly smokin' crack," said Brothers Grimm, " were truth to tell". Attention from the point, distract. Boy Blue plays cool, but watch your back, ask not for whom they toll the bell. The odds are that the deck is stacked. When one accepts the given facts, don't fool with rules of villanelles. Attention from the point, distract. A manic panic laugh attack would seem to suit me very well. The odds are that the deck is stacked. Against this there's no turning back. Not time, nor tide, it's all pell-mell. Attention from the point, distract. The odds are that the deck is stacked. |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
ROFLMAO. This is just great. Looks like it follows the form exactly (well almost exactly anyway, or is that an oxymoron?) and even makes sense. Does that mean there must be something wrong with my thinking today? Pete Never express yourself more clearly than you can think - Niels Bohr [This message has been edited by Not A Poet (04-10-2002 05:35 PM).] |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Pete, Yup. I've been accused of a lot of things, but making sense usually isn't one of them. Glad you enjoyed. Doc |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Sounds like a Villanelle to me and such humor! Are you pushing for an A++? I really enjoyed this! Shenachie |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I wouldn't know a villanelle if I lived in one but I enjoyed the hell out of your write! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Humpty Dumpty sat on a Moose Humpty Dumpty was a bit loose Humpty said, "Moose's villanelle Really Dumpty Dumped quite well..."  |
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