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Searching (Triolet - an attempt)

amigo
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since 2001-10-12

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the earth school

0 posted 2002-02-12 05:03 PM

With eyes full of hope, she tries to look
Deep into his eyes to discern the truth
To reach into his heart, every niche & nook
With eyes full of hope, she tries to look
For the love she felt, or, so she mistook
All that she found in her bloom of youth
With eyes full of hope, she tries to look
Deep into his eyes to discern the truth

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-02-12 11:00 PM

You keep writing like this, and I'm bound to learn how to do it!

Munda
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since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

2 posted 2002-02-13 06:00 AM

Wow amigo! You did great!

amigo
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since 2001-10-12

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3 posted 2002-02-13 12:08 PM

Karilea - Thank you...yep, i gotta keep trying to get it somehow...

Munda - thank you dear...you think so????

Bridget Shenachie
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since 2002-01-23

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Kansas USA

4 posted 2002-02-13 07:31 PM

Amigo,

Excellent form and great subject! You inspire me to try again.

Shenachie

amigo
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since 2001-10-12

Posts 520
the earth school

5 posted 2002-02-13 07:51 PM

Welcome home, Shenachie, i'm sure you'll like it here as much as i do...and thank you for your words....so, you're inspired again...that's wonderful...looking for your post now...

Not A Poet
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since 1999-11-03

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Oklahoma, USA

6 posted 2002-02-14 11:22 AM

Very nice subject matter. An enjoyable read.

Thanks,
Pete

amigo
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7 posted 2002-02-14 07:09 PM

Thank you for your kind words here, Pete....

Nan

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8 posted 2002-02-17 10:07 AM

Sometimes the truth lies deep beneath the surface... But the eyes do tell, don't they?

This is lovely.. I enjoyed immensely, amigo..

amigo
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since 2001-10-12

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the earth school

9 posted 2002-02-18 06:05 PM

Thank you, dear Nan....am so happy that you liked it....yes, eyes do tell...

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