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Lady in Red
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0 posted 2002-02-11 03:08 PM




I know a lady - dear to me - who says: "These things are tuff!
A Triolet is only fun for Loonies in the 'Stute!"
All I could say: "You're quite insane - this time I call your bluff!"
I know a lady - dear to me - who says: "These things are tuff!
You really think I can succeed if I try hard enough?"
"Your Alter Ego has no doubt - I'd say without dispute!"
I know a lady - dear to me - who says: "These things are tuff!
But Triolet's not only fun for Loonies in the 'Stute!"

~Juliet~


Romeo, Romeo, where fart art thou...




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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-02-11 03:58 PM



Leave it to you to make it look easy!

Dr.Moose1
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2 posted 2002-02-11 04:50 PM


Dear Red,
A most excellent interpretation (lol), but you do realize you're going to catch some flack on that last line.(You can borrow my flack-jacket as long as you put it on straight)
Doc

Dr.Moose1
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3 posted 2002-02-11 07:12 PM


Dearest Red,

A triolet penned ala "stute", why this I simply must re-boot,
lest it (post haste) does slip away, with nary but a trace , I say!
A smile upon my face cuz, shoot,
a triolet penned ala "stute", why this I simply must re-boot,
a work of art, I now salute,
to once more taste it's fine boquet,I'll paste it here that it will stay.
A triolut penned ala "stute" why this I simply must re-boot,
lest it (post haste) does slip away, with nary but a trace, I say!

[This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (02-11-2002 07:16 PM).]

Lady in Red
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4 posted 2002-02-12 12:14 PM


Oh Sunshine... easy it is not! My lady had to bring me out to get this one done. It seems I'm better in solving puzzles, but then... I've got a puzzled mind.

Dear Doc,
Once more you give me far too much credit - but I'm loving it! - and honour me with a poetic reply. High time I escape my lady more often. I miss our 'Stute! Hmmm ... I could try to get the gang together for another epic poem?

Munda
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5 posted 2002-02-17 08:32 AM


Yeek! Who let you in? (Or should I say out?)
Nan
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6 posted 2002-02-17 10:20 AM


Munda - You've been slacking off again?  Didn't we give her detention or something??/
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