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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands 
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Amigo, just a few things The syllables are not always complete But I think you're effort is great to try Da Dum, Da Dum, Da Dum is what you need It has to be five times don't ask me why I too forgot some rules at my first time The poem was good but SONNET it was not I did put all my effort in the rhyme Just look at others I did that a lot And in the end you see you'll get it right Nevertheless I like your poetry Come on try it again put on a fight It's so much fun to do all this you see We learn a lot from our teach Nanniness And from the whole lot in this funny class A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... Want to use the pics on my website? Just send me a mail and I'll give you the link. |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Oh...my...Titia dear, you're so sweet....your words are truly encouraging....thank you, thank you....i will surely work on this...yeah, this class is where i want to be...waiting for input from teach and the whole lot....thanks again....  |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Oh my! Look at you! While I had major computer problems, you taught yourself sonnets! I did notice a few minor meter errors. If you'd like an explaination in Dutch, I'd be happy to help out, just holler in e-mail.  Geesh gal, you are doing great! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Titia - You're wonderful... I don't know how you ladies do this in a language other than your own - the accents MUST be your most difficult challenge. I'm going to acquiesce to Munda on this one - She's my trusty assistant here...  |
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