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Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2001-08-03 04:16 PM



Dr. Moose now calls me “E.”
He’s basking in the revelry
He claims that E is just one letter
Signing checks couldn’t get much better

E. is short and sweet and nice
A name so plain and so precise
It brandishes simplicity
Confirms my authenticity

There's no one in the Universe
With name quite this succinct or terse
When asked my name, I say with glee---
“E”

My name is just a little odd
And not annointed yet by God
I need to be baptized anew
So He knows when my time is due!

Moose, not meaning to offend
But may I call you simply “M”?

E.

© Copyright 2001 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
Not A Poet
Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885
Oklahoma, USA
1 posted 2001-08-03 05:26 PM


I think E really has the hang of these things    

Pete

Never express yourself more clearly than you can think - Niels Bohr

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
2 posted 2001-08-03 09:28 PM


Oh WOW, I just LIKE IT, LIKE IT, LIKE IT.

E. (oh wow that's short) I can't tell you how much I enjoy your teasing poetry.

I'm off to bed now, must you know, for it's 3.30 AM overhere and tomorrow is another day.

Love you sweet poetess,

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
3 posted 2001-08-04 02:41 AM


I think it is fine..heh,, since I call Kamla "K"...heh

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

Dr.Moose1
Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA
4 posted 2001-08-05 04:38 PM


Elizabeth ,
This was beautiful , and yes " M " would be fine . A fine display of wit and talent here methinks . Yours ,
M

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
5 posted 2001-08-05 07:50 PM


Pete, Loved those little jumping pac men. THanks,

Titia, you are so sweet with your comments.THank you for reading and responding

Jamie, K is OK. M is a little monotonous, but "E" has so much potential. That reminds, me, I've got to get a hold of K. Haven't talked for a while.THanks for your comments

Dr, THanks for being such a good sport with my joking. I think Dr. will do. Thank you for your remarks

Liz

cpalmer
Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977
Phoenix, Az
6 posted 2001-08-06 02:25 PM


Well Liz,
I am late on this one...but nicely done!! I have one for you, would you like it?
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
7 posted 2001-08-06 03:30 PM


Cindi,
Where is it posted??
I would love to see it
Liz

cpalmer
Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977
Phoenix, Az
8 posted 2001-08-08 12:10 PM


It will be posted in the open forum 15!  
Hope you like it!
Cindi

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