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Jeen
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since 2000-06-07
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0 posted 2001-07-18 03:02 PM


Mrs.Blackburn goes to my church and loves to annoy
Anyone that she can find who'll fall for her ploy;
She conives the new members to help her keep things clean
But when you show up where she's asked, she's nowhere to be seen

(I'm not too good with rhyme, so this is good for me)

Jeen

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Nan
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1 posted 2001-07-22 03:49 PM


Ms Blackburn's hiding, dontcha know
Behind the last pew's where she goes
From there she eyes each one before
They find their way outside the door

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2 posted 2001-07-26 02:46 PM


Jeen~
NICELY done ~
~*Marge*~

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Titia Geertman
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3 posted 2001-07-30 04:28 PM


Your rhyme is oké, what a naughty mrs. Blackburn you have there.

Titia

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