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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Zip , Zap , and Zowie , Pow-ie , ka-boom , Batman and Robin trip over a broom , rushing right in where but only fools dare , slipped on banana peels , fell down the stairs . Catwoman purrs with a poignant meow " You could be dumber , but I don't see how ." Fur starts to fly with a zing and a zoom , " Maybe you three ought to go get a room !" Joker advises them iambicly . Biff , Bap , and Bop ( Alfred buttles for me ) Swishing persimmon and pekoe around , Sip , Slurp , and Burp , are quite disgusting sounds . (I thought they'd be much more civilized see , this is the last time I'll have them to " Tea " ) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
THis takes the prize for original sounds. A great onomathingy. Hey teacher, an A+ here! Liz |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
I agree, this is a fun one to read! Great sound words (I especially love biff and zowie!) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Me too like this one,  Charisma |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Ha Ha Ha  Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
Oh this is too funny Good Job Moose |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Eeeeeewy... this really shines a light into the onomadarkness Doc!  Great play with words and too funny! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Very cool, Moose. Now this makes sense. See ya later, same time, same Bat channel. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DrMoose~ LOL~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Dr Moose You definately have a way with sounds! Those manners...well now you know not to have THEM to tea anymore...I'll come over and show you some really good manners....BUUURRRRPPP!!! Great one! Cindi |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
"E"lizabeth , Sorry , couldn't resist . Thanks so much , as a product of 60's T.V. somehow this helped it all make sense to me . Doc Romy, Thank you . Cartoons / comics are a great inspiration for this type of writing . Bleeped if I know what half the words mean though . Doc Charisma , Thanks , I'm glad you liked . Titia , Thanks , don't know if " Batman " was ever aired over there , but if it was I'm sure you'd see the connection . Doc Suzanne , Thank you . An ounce of cure . Doc Munda , Thanks for the E-mail I haven't replied to yet . You are , of course correct , and I'm lazy . However , I'm glad you liked this . Doc Duncan , Smoke 'em if ya got 'em . First thing that popped into my head , that , and when are they going to let me out of the " stute " ,but that's another story . Doc Marge , LOL ,is good . Thanks so much . Doc cpalmer , Excuse you , and thanks . Doc |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Extremely awesome 4 stars. This maybe the best onnamottapea of the year. If you only see one onnamottapea this year see star wars but then see this one. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Cool, I think you've got this onawhatever thing down pat. This takes me back to the days of Saturday morning cartoons (you know, the GOOD ones) If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Well, your first mistake was inviting Batman for tea.. Adam West likes tea.. Batman? Nope.. nada... LOL.. giggling here...  |
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