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A Spenserian Love Sonnet |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
A Spenserian Love Sonnet Oh how sweet love's embrace does hold me tight Alike the softest touch by Angel's wing Caress of tenderness and pure delight Aloft the stars and moon two spirits sing Alike the softest touch by Angel's wing As when the moon embracing morning's sun Aloft the stars and moon two spirits sing Two melodies entwine to only one As when the moon embracing morning's sun Ethereal awareness fills their eyes Two melodies entwine to only one In universal peace aloofness dies All cuddled up and safe in love's embrace I find myself lost in love's calming face Munda  Sorry, had this one finished just before class started hehe. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Munda~ Well ... just fudging a little are we ??? Forget that it's great ... Forget that it has such depth and beauty ... It will be difficult to forget these images ! And a sonnet to boot ! You little sneaky ahead-of-the-class poet you ! Beautiful ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Munda, Very nice , It kinda gets that warm fuzzy going .( better watch out for that ! ) Doc |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
Well done Munda. A beauty to read. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Munda, Forget the Doc, you can sit next to me. Lovely images and flow. Great! Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful sonnet. Wonderful job of the imagery. Thanks for sharing. "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
So, I still love it.  Gene (formerly, u_gene) |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Thanks guys... I somehow got inspired.  |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Munda this is beautiful, I wish I could write like this! Really enjoyed it. Debbie |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'm always amazed at how well you manage your meter so well, as English is your second language... That in itself must be a challenge.. You put your sonnet together beautifully, with an interesting repitition of key lines for effect... Nicely done, my friend..  |
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