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Gene
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Colorado, USA

0 posted 2001-01-12 03:39 PM


Here's my sad little attempt--first time so don't laugh, O.K.? Besides, I'm only taking this class for non-credit.
--

All the words I have to say
Come in most peculiar ways.
Read only what you must
Or your eyes might deceive your trust.
So if you wonder what
To believe, just look closer, but
In the
Column on the left, you?ll find the answer...duh!

---
Gene

© Copyright 2001 Gene M. - All Rights Reserved
Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
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1 posted 2001-01-12 04:04 PM


Hey, another non-credit stu.!  Good deal, I feel better already.
But hey, get good at this and we could become commissioned poets, write anything they ask.
Yuk, yuk.
(Second one doesn't seem any easier, tho, dang it!)
/:^)==
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Romy
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2 posted 2001-01-12 04:34 PM


Gene,
Sorry, I was completely straight-faced until the last line when I lost it on your Duh! comment. In fact, I'm still giggling, it really struck my funny-bone!  Seriously though, I think your acrostic is simply duhlightful (couldn't help myself) and you deserve an A!

Suzanne Arlene
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3 posted 2001-01-12 06:07 PM


Oh that is just way too cute  .Good job gene LOL   Suzanne
Munda
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4 posted 2001-01-12 06:16 PM


OK, not laughing and not giving you credit... but I still liked it.
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5 posted 2001-01-12 08:30 PM


UGene~
The first step taken - is a step taken !
Really a cute way to tackle a tough job.
I like the humor.
LOL !  At my workplace - my computer password is DUH !
It just says so much !
~*Marge*~



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Kethry
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6 posted 2001-01-13 09:37 PM


U Gene,
I really loved the humor in this one. My fingers wanted to type Homer because of the Duh. But it is an expressive word. I also liked that you used acrostic as the word. On to level two.
write on
Kethry.


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Gene
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Colorado, USA
7 posted 2001-01-13 10:17 PM


Thanks everyone,

This is fun, but it can also be mind boggling.

Kethry--
Level Two? I didn't pay for the materials--I'm only a non-credit student, remember? I only have Microsoft Acrostic Version 2.0 - heh, heh

~Gene  

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8 posted 2001-01-14 12:49 PM


This is a wonderful first Acrostic! I love the humor! I'm looking forward to seeing more.

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
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Nan
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9 posted 2001-01-30 06:28 PM


Hey u_

Did I approve this course audit??... Did I? Did I? Huh?? Huh??...

Gene
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10 posted 2001-02-01 03:38 PM


Uh, oh, um...well, how 'bout if I stay after and clean the blackboard?

Gene

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