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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
LOL... here a pantoum from the workshop about a year ago. I guess Nan is a little busy at the moment, but I thought this may give you a bit of an idea. Hope you don't mind, but I'll wait to find out what meter Nan wants this time  Such a sweet caress It was such a sweet caress On that weary dreary day Longing for my bonnie lass Solemn grief ate me away On that weary dreary day Death came passing by my door Solemn grief ate me away Heartache mine forever more Death came passing by my door Looking at my soppy eyes Heartache mine forever more Bonnie lass she just had died Looking at my soppy eyes Feeling sorry in a way Bonnie lass she just had died Said "This is your lucky day" Feeling sorry in a way Her kiss cold yet sweet to me Said "This is your lucky day, Your sweet bonnie lass you'll see" Her kiss cold yet sweet to me Longing for my bonnie lass "Your sweet bonnie lass you'll see" It was such a sweet caress Good luck ! Munda |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is a lovely poem. I should have read it more carefully before I wrote mine. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Agreed , an excellent example quite eloquently phrased in it's simplicity . Less is more . Thanks. Doc |
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