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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
O'er course of time what hands have smote at un-seen foes and crimes of note false words conspire to hide betrayed from black and white in hues now grayed At un-seen foes and crimes of note the poet/mime as if by rote from black and white in hues now grayed by paradigm imbued displayed The poet/mime as if by rote oft' times en-visioned will emote by paradigm imbued displayed a clime of honesty portrayed Oft' times en-visioned will emote in chimes of movement that connote a clime of honesty portrayed sans sound this message is conveyed While ryhme of reason we obey false words conspire to hide betrayed the truth that action will denote o'er course of time what hands have smote [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 12-07-2000).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Bravo! A perfect pantoum. You do these things so well. You are the master of poetic form Liz |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Liz, In all honesty I hardly feel I am deserving of such high praise ,( but thank you none the less ).Maybe it's those sleep learning tapes I'm listening to in back of class , while I'm wearing the dark glasses with the eye-balls painted on them so it looks like I'm paying attention . Doc |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
and this one I will study also, I love form in poetry and learning.. What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
I just love reading your stuff Dr. That was so good  Suzanne |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Wonderful! How come mine didn't turn out like this? LOL. Elizabeth is right, You are the master! |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Irish Rose , Suzanne , and Debbie , Once again I am humbled by your favorable comments ,( Hah ! who says if you snooze you lose !)Thank you all and by the way , has anybody seen the "Teach" lately ? Doc |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
LOL No need to comment on the Pantoum thingy... I did that already hehe, but... a great poem it is ! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
*mumbling grumbling crumbling grumbling mumbling*...  |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Nan , Sorry teach , would you believe that by writing these every which way but right , it helps me to keep the proper form in my head ? Doc |
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