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On Some Incanted Evening ( The Invocation Of All Hallow's Eve)
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
All Hallow's Eve the ghouls entreat. All Hallow's Eve the ghouls entreat, "What follows leave to fools my sweet," "What follows leave to fools my sweet!" What follows sweet all Hallow's Eve my ghouls entreat the fools to leave! Lost prowl this region 'neath dark sky. lost prowl this region 'neath dark sky, and howl some legion's haunting cry, and howl some legion's haunting cry. Some legion's dark ,'neath lost sky prowl and haunting region , cry this howl! "Begone all those who worship day!" "Begone all those who worship day!" "This night is our's with which to play!" "This night is our's with which to play!" "Worship is gone , be those to day, all who , with which this night , our's play!" "Worship those ghouls this night my sweet, and howl this dark region , entreat all fools who play 'neath legion's sky begone!, to prowl with haunting cry all which is our's , what follows leave, lost to the day , some Hallow's Eve! [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 10-17-2000).] |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Snyxxx , snyxxx, Sorry must have dozed off . What gives ? Does my poetry put everybody to sleep ? Oh well , take two , but don't call in the morning, I think I'll sleep in late. Doc |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Doc, I am, I must admit, dismayed...but I will NOT go quietly....lol..I'm thinking, there must be a way....to make this damned paradelle make sense? Would ya believe, the computer ate my homework? (Don't.) Okay...but...it's not my forte'...I just want it to end up making sense TO ME. so here I go, back to paper, and a good gel pen... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Doc~ Just forget the fact that you did it soooooo well ! I just found this paradelle ! Just amazing ! I did one ONCE and swore I'd never do another. I mayyyyyy change my mind ! Yours is so good ! WOW ! LOL @ Serenity !(cutie) ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is so beautifuly done I can almost hear Vincent Price reciting this Very well done Liz |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Why thank you , Marge and Liz , you are both much too kind .Thank you again . Doc |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
serenity, Darn, in reviewing this I see I never replied to your post. Simply inexcusable !Thank you ! Can't afford to offend anyone , I'm already in dutch with the teach ( something about adding and subtracting words willy-nilly). My apologies , and good luck on your assignment. Doc |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
That is a wonderful poem. You make it look so easy .: ) Suzanne |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Suzanne, Thank you and happy halloween. Doc |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Aha... The good Doc redeems himself...  Check it out, you guys... This one has an expanded number of words - The more you use, the more difficult it becomes - and Doc's done a fine job of it. By the way - He's also used a fixed rhyme scheme... and set his words to iambic tetrameter... and took the liberty of playing with his word structure (Begone = be + gone)... This one's GOOD.....  |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Thanks teach , now can I see about getting a more comfortable chair ? This one keeps waking me up. Doc |
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