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Lone Wolf
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0 posted 2000-06-07 10:17 PM


Time's tide travels tenatively
Through the tantalizing tropics
There two timid tigers
Take turns testing temptation

By Byron Bay big boats
Breeze Before beautiful beaches
Beyond bay's breakpoint bouy
Beavers busily build bridges

Some sea shells shine
Spreading simple sand silhouettes
Swans sing sweet songs
Somewhere solitary shark swims




 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

© Copyright 2000 Jennifer L. Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Munda
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1 posted 2000-06-18 03:57 PM


My goodness, this almost gives me a inferiority complex LOL Very good !  
Lone Wolf
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2 posted 2000-06-18 05:13 PM


Munda,

Why the complex?  LOL.....Thanks for the reply.  

LW


Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith


Munda
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3 posted 2000-06-18 05:50 PM


Hehe, because you guys can do something I can't.   And don't say I can, because this is too much for a Dutchie.  
Nan
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4 posted 2000-06-19 10:19 AM


Neato... I like it!!!

... and I don't doubt Dutchie's dexterity - Do you??...

Lone Wolf
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5 posted 2000-06-19 11:28 PM


Nan,

Thank you!!  Fun to write.  No way, I do not doubt Munda's abilities, she will do great I am sure!!  

Hey Munda, have to do one or Nan will fail you!!  LOL......


Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith


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