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Teen Poetry #2
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Ender
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since 1999-12-08
Posts 200
Yuma, AZ USA
0 posted 2000-01-29 01:44 PM

Your eyes
Are like the stars that fill the heavens
You hair
Is like a sheet of smooth silk
Your skin
Is like the smooth petals of a rose
Your heart
Is like a sponge to love
Your sould
Is like a bucket of kindness
You are beautiful
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ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-01-29 05:11 PM

Cool poem. er, do you usually give your poetry to the people you write it about? if u do, they should be really chuffed cos it's really nice.
Keep writing and  
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