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Last date with Autumn |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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The thirsty stars lapped water out of puddles The crispy breeze roamed through the lonely streets I chewed my cotton candy, and the clouds Would disconnect into the tiny threads and bits The restless night leaned gently on my shoulders The streetlights shinned directly in my eyes But nothing passed my skin, my flesh, my fortress I walked without a care, like hypnotized So here we are and this, our final date together, Let’s make it seem eternal and unique And I shall wait for you, for worse and for the better Afraid to hear “good-bye,” we do not speak <!signature--> <font face="Arial, Verdana" size="1" color="#000080"> I fell in love and kept on falling </font> [This message has been edited by Master (edited 01-27-2000).] |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
how do you do it Master?! So much description! WOW!  "Superiority to fate is difficult to learn. 'Tis not conferred by any, but possible to earn"--Emily Dickinson-"Superiority of Fate" |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
I'd tell you the secret, but then I wouldn't be the only master! ~LOL~ |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Master, I must admit that you're a good poet, but so full of yourself. I think you're about to meet your match! ~LOL~ ~Kristi Lynn "Sometimes people care too much. I think it's called love." -Winnie the Pooh |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
A "good" poet? ohhh... c'mon I know you could better than that, How about "great", "excellent" or "amazing"? LOL |
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