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Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2000-01-27 12:12 PM


The thirsty stars lapped water out of puddles
The crispy breeze roamed through the lonely streets
I chewed my cotton candy, and the clouds
Would disconnect into the tiny threads and bits
The restless night leaned gently on my shoulders
The streetlights shinned directly in my eyes
But nothing passed my skin, my flesh, my fortress
I walked without a care, like hypnotized
So here we are and this, our final date together,
Let’s make it seem eternal and unique
And I shall wait for you, for worse and for the better
Afraid to hear “good-bye,” we do not speak

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<font face="Arial, Verdana" size="1" color="#000080"> I fell in love and kept on falling

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[This message has been edited by Master (edited 01-27-2000).]

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sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
1 posted 2000-01-27 12:45 PM


how do you do it Master?! So much description! WOW!  

 "Superiority to fate is difficult to learn. 'Tis not conferred by any, but possible to earn"--Emily Dickinson-"Superiority of Fate"

Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA
2 posted 2000-01-27 01:01 PM


I'd tell you the secret, but then I wouldn't be the only master! ~LOL~
angel6917
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
3 posted 2000-01-27 03:50 PM


Master, I must admit that you're a good poet, but so full of yourself.  I think you're about to meet your match!  ~LOL~
~Kristi Lynn

 "Sometimes people care too much. I think it's called love." -Winnie the Pooh

Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA
4 posted 2000-01-27 03:56 PM


A "good" poet? ohhh... c'mon I know you could better than that, How about "great", "excellent" or "amazing"? LOL
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