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chic
Member

since 2000-01-26

Posts 245
yellville, Ar, U.S.

0 posted 2000-01-27 09:28 AM

What is this?
This feeling inside.
Unto which
I must abide.

Feeling happy
full of joy.
All because
of a single boy.

At first I was shy
scared and alone.
Now all of a sudden
those feelings are gone.

He makes me feel
as no one has.
I begin to ask
will this last?

Will he feel the same
in years past?
Or will he change
and leave without a glance?

STOP IT GIRL!
What's wrong with you?
Can't you see
he's in love with you?

OF COURSE! now it's clear.
I know know that in my heart
he will always be right here.

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

1 posted 2000-01-27 10:05 AM

great poem sis. you are really opening up in the poetry sense...good job!

"Superiority to fate is difficult to learn. 'Tis not conferred by any, but possible to earn"--Emily Dickinson-"Superiority of Fate"

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2000-01-27 08:28 PM

Welcome to Passions! This is a great first post. I hope to read more of you.

Astraea
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now

3 posted 2000-01-27 09:15 PM

Welcome to Passions! Lovely poem.

~Astraea

"Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

eve_angel
Junior Member

since 2000-01-22

Posts 23
Australia

4 posted 2000-01-29 06:51 PM

Great choice for a first post poem. I'll be looking forward to reading more of your stuff.

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

5 posted 2000-01-30 02:00 AM

What a great first post! Hope to be reading more of your poetry

Salooma

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

6 posted 2000-01-30 09:58 AM

Neat way of expressing your feelings. I hope it all works out for you and him. Keep writing and keep

chic
Member

since 2000-01-26

Posts 245
yellville, Ar, U.S.

7 posted 2000-02-01 10:03 AM

thanx all i didn't think it was very good, but my boyfriend said it was cool so i decided to post it...thanx all

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