Love Falls to Death (My personal Favorite poem-for all the romantics-don't miss this)

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Love Falls to Death (My personal Favorite poem-for all the romantics-don't miss this)

Madden18
Junior Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 18
Connecticut

0 posted 2000-01-27 12:09 PM

~To me this poem came to me naturally. It's a wonderful telling of my two favorite subjects;Love and Nature. This poem has many symbols and can be interpreted in many different ways. If you'd like to take the time, just email me or look for me online and I'll give you my personal interpretation. But, please, enjoy what I think is my greatest writing and perhaps the last I will ever post~

Death is Beautiful when it becomes Fall
The trees lose their leaves but still stand tall
The leaves that fall are Brown, Orange and Red
Such Gorgeous colors for things that are dead
A wonderful season where Love is at chance
Filled with Lust, Passion and Romance
Couples come home to candles and wine
Lighting a fire and ready to dine
Soft pianos fill the atmosphere
But the Lust in each other's eyes is the only thing they hear
As their lips touch, time becomes endless
And without saying a word, their Love is confessed
Their hearts are big, it Loves and it cries
As they look and get lost in each other's eyes
Just one more touch, one more kiss
For it's something one day they both might miss
One more look, one more glare
One last endless moment to stop and stare
To marvel at beauty, to know it's her
Is this true Love? He's not quite sure
To marvel at grace, to know it's him
Is this true Love? It looks very grim
And just like black clouds roll in the sky
Happiness ends and they say goodbye
Their world's are dark, lonely and gray
They want to come back to each other to stay
There is no one to kiss, no one to hold
And Love is a story that was just once told
They are both gone but want to know where
The clouds are parting and the Love is still there
The clouds part and melts the cold snow
And both their hearts tell them where to go
He marvels at Beauty, she marvels at Grace
As both of them run to firmly embrace
Their Love was a destiny, there for a reason
Isn't Spring such a beautiful season....

Seth Madden

Seth Madden

Mistikman
Senior Member

since 2000-01-10

Posts 682
San Jose, CA, USA

1 posted 2000-01-27 02:17 AM

Wow man, another awsome piece

I would give my left leg for the writing ability you have

I would attempt to interpret it here, but Im strapped for time. Great work, nontheless.

I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion

chic
Member

since 2000-01-26

Posts 245
yellville, Ar, U.S.

2 posted 2000-01-27 09:31 AM

This poem was great, very descriptive and it had alot of feeling. I really loved this poem!

angel6917
Member

since 2000-01-14

Posts 478
WI

3 posted 2000-01-27 04:02 PM

This was the first poem of yours I read, and I must admit, it's wonderful. I wish I had your ability... Keep it up!
~Kristi Lynn

"Sometimes people care too much. I think it's called love." -Winnie the Pooh

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