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When Will My Heart Beat Again?
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When Will My Heart Beat Again? |
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Dean Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120Canada |
I know my quest is to be bound with love I yearn all the time for love and affection. I need her heart to be bound with mine I need some sort of Direction. My heart and soul are restless they have been searching for quite sometime Will love every come to me? Or does it just take everlasting time. I’m very lonely at heart I never find what I’m looking for. As I turn the pages in my book I don’t know what’s in store. Half my soul has been missing for a long time. I wish I could feel her warm hear beat against mine Every beat would be life in to mine Maybe it will only be time. [This message has been edited by Dean (edited 01-25-2000).] |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Great poem! I can relate. Hope you find what you're looking for, I hope to find it, too. Keep up the good work... ~Kristi Lynn "Sometimes people care too much. I think it's called love." -Winnie the Pooh |
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Madden18 Junior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 18Connecticut |
Dean, this is Seth. I would like to first thank you also, for your comments on my work. Thank you. They are greatly appreciated. And, I think this poem can relate to one of mine. We are all on a search for that thing called Love...I'm sure with the way you write, she'll come soon enough. Take care, Seth Madden |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
You will find that love...keep faith. Wonderful work, keep on writing! *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
I love your poem and the thoughts behind it. I'm sure she will find you if you keep your heart open. |
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Nights Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 56 |
Hey, thanks for you replies to my poems. I like this poem cause i can relate to it alot. I feel the same about this guy. All i can say is to keep hope, cause you never what can happen. "It's my heart that pounds beneath my flesh it's my mouth that pushes out this breath..."-FTE |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Well Dino....yanno?....Love comes and goes like a bad cold....It seems it comes on so quick....makes ya sick....makes your eyes watery...gives ya the sniffles....and may even make ya sick to your stomach some, ya don't feel like eating...now does this sound like something to really go out and search for?.....Okay, so it has it's "good" things too, but yanno?...When ya really do find the right person...and ya find true love....you'll know it for sure.....it's kinda like pneumonia!....Then you're really in for some very high medical bills, fever, chills etc....Then ya get married, have kids, go broke putting them through proms and homecomings and college, watch them grow up, move out on their own, then they catch that same darn cold...turns into pneumonia too....and your life's over?...So just wait it out...take your flu shots, hope for the best....and give it time..... |
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eve_angel Junior Member
since 2000-01-22
Posts 23Australia |
This poem is really good. I hope you find the special person you are looking for. |
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