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since 1999-12-02
Posts 443

0 posted 2000-01-23 10:51 PM

Revenge is so cruel
Yet tormenture is worse
So why not play their game
To see how it feels?
Why not kill two birds
With just one stone?
Why not lie once in a while
To save from feelings hurt?
Why? Because everything is just too damn hard
Trying to control yourself
Without getting out of hand
Trying to say you’re sorry
When you really don't mean it
Why bother trying to trust me
When you know you never will?
Everything in your head.......

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since 2000-01-10
Posts 682
San Jose, CA, USA
1 posted 2000-01-23 11:09 PM

Very nice as always Jer, I hope your situation improves. Somehow it always hurts more when people try to force themselves to feel some way, just to try and not hurt you. Sometimes relationships seem so futile....

 I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion

since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
2 posted 2000-01-23 11:10 PM

i know exactly how you're feeling
it sucks to be so confused
thi was a very well put poem though  
i liked it alot

"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
3 posted 2000-01-24 10:50 AM

Jer:  I loved your poem.  I can totally relate, especially now.  The person I wrote those other poems for made me feel the way your poem says you feel.  I hope your situation improves.  Now I have another one of your poems I have to live up to.  Keep up the good work and tell me what you think of my new poem I should be posting soon.

 "Sometimes people care too much. I think it's called love." -Winnie the Pooh

since 1999-12-04
Posts 202

4 posted 2000-01-24 03:14 PM

Nice work, Jer! Kind of sums up my feelings, too... :.)

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5 posted 2000-01-24 03:58 PM

Hey Jer! I really like this poem. I can relate... keep up the great work!

 "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world"

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