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The Rose I Wore
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The Rose I Wore |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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The rose I wore, Is still here. I forgot all about it, Until I looked through the memories of the past. You were always there, And whenever I would cry, In your arms is where I’d always be. The pain always seemed to disappear when I was with you, In your arms, and you in my thoughts. The rose I wore, It holds so many memories, More than I ever thought it could. As I hold it now, I know that I can count on you, To be there when I need you most. Has our friendship become more, You hold me, and I know, I belong here, In your arms. The rose I wore, Holds my thoughts of you. I lost myself, In the memories held by the rose I wore. [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 02-01-2000).] |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Hi Tamma, Welcome to Passions. This was great first post. I know what feelings you speak of in the poem. Great job, keep up the good work. [This message has been edited by Jer (edited 01-17-2000).] |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
bringing this back up, in case anybody is interested in what my first post was *how was i to kno that today id meet someone like you? how was i to see the light with him in my path and you too far to touch?* |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Great first post, I must have been blind when I missed it the first time around, heh. Well, I guess this calls for a belated welcome to passions!  I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
LoL...my mom read this and brought me a rose home today  *how was i to kno that today id meet someone like you? how was i to see the light with him in my path and you too far to touch?* -pom16pom- |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Awwww... that's so nice of your Mom. If your reading this Tamma's mom: GOOD JOB! TWO THUMBS UP! "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA |
The past always comes back to haunt you, but there is always a way to fight it if it hurts you. keep your chin up and look on the bright side of life. continue your journey. and keep up the great work. -Ender *I am not one to be feared. I am one that should be loved forever. -Ender* |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
You did a good job at expressing the feelings in this poem. I can relate, sometimes memories like that come back yet i feel it's just to see how strong we are and if we can handle it. Anyhow... Welcome to passions and i hope to see some more of your poetry. Isa |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
I am really proud of this poem inparticular, as it is the only one that i wrote in about 5 mins and turned out so (dare i say) perfect(compared to some of my others that i refuse to post) ~~~Tamma~~~ -pom16pom- "Yes, I think 'toast' is an appropriate description." -Jaya Ballard, Task Mage |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
I think describing your past as a rose which holds all your memories is a very beautiful and original idea. It gives light to your words. Way cool. |
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