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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
We were such close friends, but yet, it feels like more. It seems like our talks have become longer, our hugs have become tighter, and when we look at each other, it's as if we're looking into each other's hearts, hoping what we're seeing is true. |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Wow, great post. I can relate this one to my life right now. Anyway, good job. |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Jer: I'm glad you liked my poem, and that you can relate. I've put my feelings into other poems, too, that I should be posting soon. I'd really like to hear what you think of those ones, too. Angel6917 "Sometimes people care too much. I think it's called love." -Winnie the Pooh |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Nice poem, and I wish you luck with your friend, I seem to not be having such luck with mine  I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Exactly something that I can relate to. Lovely poem. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Dean Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120Canada |
I can Totally relate to your poem!! Keep up the good work and I will to continue to read your sweet poems!! "Live to love or why live at all" Deano :) |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
I'm glad you all liked my poem so much. Mistikman: I wish you better luck with your friend... Astraea: Thanks much! Dean: Thanks, but I can't promise all of my poems will be so sweet... Angel6917 "Sometimes people care too much. I think it's called love." -Winnie the Pooh |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
good luck with your friend...i've been there..i hope your ending is happier than mine was! --Lavada |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
heh, nice poem Kristi, I know exactly how that feels. Well, back to reading old posts *is super bored and has time on his hands, never a good thing* "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Sam~ You need to quit complaining about being bored!!!! I seldomly have time on my hands anymore, and when I do, I use it in a way that keeps me happy.  ~Kristi Lynn |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
well, I try to, but often time what makes me happy can also stress me out, so I have to stop doing it for a while, and thus get bored. Also, why me being bored and having time on my hands is a bad thing, this is one SMALL example of what my mind thinks up: "I am not a living entity, but rather the physical manifestation of my teachers' imaginations. Thus, if I fall asleep in class, it isn't my fualt, all my other teachers are imagining me asleep, and sense there are more of them, they overpower you imagining me taking notes" BTW, that worked on my history teacher. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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ArghJae New Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 4 |
yeah i have the similar feeling...but now it feels the opposite...=(...but im not gonna quit on what im trying to accomplish ...so ill just have to see what will happen....ryte? |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Just keep on trying whatever it is you want to accomplish~ but don't do anything to hurt somebody, k? I know the feeling of hurt and pain way too well... ~Kristi Lynn |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Sweet poem. I wish you luck on the quest of true love  |
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Dean Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120Canada |
Very, very, very, very, good peom!! It was really heart felt. I could really relate to it!! Your poem has inspired me to write some poetry untill now I haven't really been in the mood for quite sometime. Yours very truley Dean "Live to love or why live at all" Deano :) |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Dean~ Thank you again for your sweet reply. Good luck with your poetry. ESP~ Thanks for wishing me luck. I think I'll need it with the last experience I had with love. ~Kristi Lynn |
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