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Teen Poetry #2

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foolinlove
New Member

since 2000-01-09

Posts 5

0 posted 2000-01-09 12:11 PM

I'm new in here but my poems i feel need to be read.

I am a slowly dying fire:
Waiting for the flame to go out
I am a raging bull:
looking for something to ram

I am a fine wine;
sweeter with age
I am a powerful engine battery;
always working yet slowly dying every day

I am a red rose;
just now blooming.
yet never assuming
when i will shed my rose
and shrivel up to die

I am a singer,singing a sad
slow,country song.
Always thinking of the music
and the fans

I am a poet.

[This message has been edited by foolinlove (edited 01-11-2000).]

Quiet Lightning
Member

since 1999-12-26

Posts 56

1 posted 2000-01-09 05:13 PM

welcome to passions.Sounds like you had it rough with love.

Jer
Member

since 1999-12-02

Posts 443
USA

2 posted 2000-01-09 11:23 PM

Ahhh... yes. Welcome to Passions. I liked your poem. It is such a common feeling that alot of teens share. Good read. Thanks.

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2000-01-10 05:13 PM

Welcome to Passions. Did you check your e-mail? Love is a difficult thing to understand at any age. Well done.

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