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Teen Poetry #2

The Beginning's End

peanogrl83
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since 1999-12-04

Posts 202

0 posted 2000-01-07 04:56 PM

Gee, I seem to be prolifically writing bad poetry today.....

A cheery hello, a sad goodbye,
The right to live, the right to die.
A sunny day, a starry night,
In blackest dark, in whitest light.
To be in love, to succumb to hate,
To numbly leave, to painfully wait.
To rapidly run, to sit and stay,
To shamefully quit, to gloriously play.
To slowly stop, to quickly go,
A simple yes, a complex no.
A happy smile, a saddening frown,
To stack up, to file down.
Each pair of these is but one,
Where one's ended, the other's begun.

April Resi
Member

since 1999-10-18

Posts 119
Alabama

1 posted 2000-01-07 05:38 PM

I kinda liked it!

smiles

April

...in your eyes, I see my future in an instant,
And there it goes, I think I found my best friend...

Jer
Member

since 1999-12-02

Posts 443
USA

2 posted 2000-01-07 05:55 PM

Bad? What are you talking about. This poem simplily procames life as it is. Think about it... you have good times but then there are bad times. Times to simle and laugh, times to frown and cry. A small quote I like to use on life is " You can't smile if you haven't cried. Therefore you can win if you haven't lost." Anyway, good job Vreni. I liked it.

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