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Since I First Saw You
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Since I First Saw You |
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shyone Junior Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 10 |
Since I first saw you, I knew I loved you. I knew you were the one for me. I knew we'd be together, Until the hour glass of time runs out. We'd love eachother far beyond forever. I knew you'd consume my heart, with all that you are. I knew that we'd cherrish every moment, That we would spend together. I knew I'd never feel this again, The feelings I feel for you. I knew if I lost you, Forever I'd be blue. And I knew all this, Since I first saw you. I'm extremely new to the poetry writing thing, but it comes frrom the heart. I wrote it because it is what I wish I had the courage to tell this girl at school. If you're reading this, Jonnie, it's how I really feel. If you're not Jonnie, and you're reading this, please tell me what you think. I really want to know. |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Welcome to Passions  I thought your poem was very good and hope to see more from you really soon.  ~Susie~ |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wonderful work, I hope she listens to what you have to say. Welcome to Passions! *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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Blue Eyed Wanderer Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 84Rhode Island, US |
This is great! If she doesn't read it here, you should definately give it to her. Best of luck! And welcome to Passions! ~Jess~ |
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April Resi Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 119Alabama |
Very good poem! I liked it a great deal and I wish you luck with this girl. Welcome to passions, and I can't wait to hear more from you! April ...in your eyes, I see my future in an instant, And there it goes, I think I found my best friend... |
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shyone Junior Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 10 |
Wow! Thanks for the wonderful comments! I'll put a couple more poems up as soon as I finish my homework. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions. Writing from the heart is where you start. If you are interested in persuing poetry farther I have posted some poetry pointer sites here. If you are interested in seeing them please contact me and I will move them back to the top of the page. |
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Diajua New Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 4 |
I enjoyed your poem very much,you have a lot of talentgood luck. |
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