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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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She sat by the fir trees, in a garden of growth. Where tigers, sometimes went to loath. Her coat of red, a burden it carried. Her vulgularity, beneath it was burried. Her head, swung low. A price, it did tow. But eyes, like the deep blue sea. She was frightend by men. And hurt, you see. In the garden of growth. Beneath the fir trees. Vulgar, and cruel. But scared and misjudged. A look of pure domesticality. And banned, she was. From a world of love, and a world of hate. Beneath, a lovely golden gate. So she went to the fir trees, in a garden of growth. Where tigers sometimes went to loath, and tease her. about her misjudged fortune. But for her, it wasn't about torture. Loves may seem forgotten, but the true will once shine through. |
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Angela16 Junior Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 37USA |
i really like the style of writing you used in this poem!! It's a really great poem! Angela |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
A very interesting piece this. It deserves a second read and I will give it that later. Today I am ill and can not focus my brain to read between the lines. Well done. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
thanks all. just addin this to my library. Morning rain fell on my window, and I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be gray, put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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