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My True Friend
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My True Friend |
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Dean Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120Canada |
I think of her long blond hair. I think of her loving stair . I think of her as a soft, warm, teddy bear. I think of her as my true friend that will be there till my end. I think of her heart and I know it has been hurt, played with, thrown in the dirt. I think of just her heart, it is big and warm and has been through many storms. I think of her and I see a loyal, caring, friend and I promise her I’ll be there till the end. I think of how lucky I was to be bound with her friendship. I think of how her cute face looks so innocent. I thank her for showing me something that I thought didn’t exist. I will always be with her even through the deepest abyss. I think of her and all I can see, is that she owns a peace of me. "Live to love or why live at all" Deano :) |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Very nice. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Hey Deano...  These are lovely setiments but I can see them better used in a free verse fashion. eg.I think of her, Long blonde hair, Loving stare. She is like, A teddy bear, Warm and soft, Fresh as air. My one true friend, Til the end. Though she's been hurt, thrown in the dirt. Her heart is warm, Through many a storm. Just a thought, what do you think? |
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