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Teen Poetry #2

Life and it's many things

Dean
Member

since 1999-11-23

Posts 120
Canada

0 posted 1999-12-30 02:09 AM

This piece has been deleted because of the vulgar language used. The poet has been contacted about the problem. ANY and ALL poetry not conforming to the guidelines specified in this forum will be deleted.

We do not have may guidelines here but the ones we do have are for the well being of the forum.

Thankyou.

Marilyn

[This message has been edited by Marilyn (edited 12-31-1999).]

SuGaR*sTaR
New Member

since 1999-09-19

Posts 7
louisville,ky

1 posted 1999-12-30 02:10 AM

to me, this is a lot of poem about nothing. the point in it is not very clear. maybe you could explain it

Astraea
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now

2 posted 1999-12-30 02:17 AM

There's a lot of points in this one, so maybe you should just pick one? But, overall, nice.

~Astraea

"Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

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