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Leigh
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since 1999-12-29
Posts 20


0 posted 1999-12-29 01:13 PM



I fell in love with you the moment I saw you,
Hair of golden blonde, eyes of crystal blue.

Soon I got to know you, or so I thought I did,
I only saw the mask you wore, that underneath you hid.

On the phone we talked each and every day,
You were just so wonderful in every single way.

I thought we hared something hard to find,
I guess I listened to my heart and not my mind.

I heard the warnings from my friends and even from the Lord,
Which I did not listen to and carelessly ignored.

Now you have left me broken hearted and alone,
And gone is the love that for me you once had shown.

But my friends are all still by my side,
Along with my best friend and one true guide.

My Master, King of Kings, and Lord,
Jesus Christ- son of God who is no longer ignored.

He gives me all the love I will ever need,
I'm no longer alone and my soul has finally been freed.

© Copyright 1999 Leigh - All Rights Reserved
Marissa
Junior Member
since 1999-12-25
Posts 20

1 posted 1999-12-29 04:53 PM


Hey, that was a really great poem.  Sorry about your situation...i can relate.
Keep up the good work!

Marilyn
Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 1999-12-29 08:11 PM


Welcome to Passions. I am glad that you have found the true strength. You will never be failed by holding the love of your savior close. May he bless your life.
Astraea
Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now
3 posted 1999-12-29 08:14 PM


Very good.  What a truth to keep in mind.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."


Angel
Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551
Pennsylvania
4 posted 1999-12-30 12:47 PM


Welcome to Passions  . I really like this poem, I can relate all to well. But each and every time I come back to the Lord and I believe he will lead me to my one true love. Great poem, hope to see more soon

 ~Susie~



eagle
Junior Member
since 1999-10-20
Posts 39
singapore
5 posted 1999-12-30 05:17 AM


Liked the poem very much  
Keep it up.

pop_tart14
Junior Member
since 1999-11-22
Posts 12
North Dakota, USA
6 posted 1999-12-30 07:19 PM


ohhhhhhh.  this is a great poem!!  keep writing cause i wanna keep reading!!

 *i'd rather live one moment of something wonderful than a lifetime of nothing special*
*when you like someone, you like them inspite of their faults. when you love someone, you love them with their faults*
*the course of true love never did run smooth*
*nothing ruins the taste of peanut butter like unrequited love*

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