Teen Poetry #2 |
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Disappointing Others~please post replys |
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PoeticDreams Junior Member
since 1999-12-23
Posts 35Lindsay,Oklahoma US |
As I stare at lil children no worry in there eyes My life sux then do I realize I've followed the path that everyone thought that I would take They knew I was all talk I'm just a fake They knew where I started they knew where I would end People always made fun, we were poor I was always late on the fashion trend But I disappointed them I changed my ways the rode I wound up on Now to God's word I am ever so drown I was a weed smokin pill poppin punk Who lived in a trunk But I decide this had to stop I went to work, got me an apartment Going to school. See you don't always have to do what others say You can do things your way Its your life, do things right Show people you still have a fight ~¤Always look to the sunrise and you'll never see the shadows¤~Anee Frank |
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shell-grunge Junior Member
since 1999-12-23
Posts 17 |
i really liked it! i could see it as lyrics. power. showed them where to stick it!!!! go off like a frog in a sock!!! shell |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions. Indeed strong words. Continue to follow the path that leads you to happiness. One small thought. When you post so many poems all at once, some get over looked. Post them one at a time and you will receive more replies to each. Again Welocme. ![]() |
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Leigh Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 20 |
That was so great! I think shell was right about the lyrics thing. I can see that becoming a song or something like that. Keep up the writing!! I love it! |
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