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This is my first poem, please reply.
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This is my first poem, please reply. |
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Marissa Junior Member
since 1999-12-25
Posts 20 |
There is this certain someone who makes me feel a certain way. "Don't waste your time, he'll only hurt you" is what some people say. But when he smiles and looks my way, my heart begins to pound. I could listen to him talk for hours, his voice is one of the sweetest sounds. It feels so good to see his charming face And even better to be enveloped in his warm, sweet embrace. It puts me in a state of bliss To know I'm the one he chooses to kiss. Whenever he's around I grin form ear to ear, But in the back of my mind what those people said, I can surely still hear. Too wrapped up in the way he makes me feel I'm willing to get hurt, even though a heart takes long to heal. I hope the day does not come soon when he says my name Only to reveal that he no longer feels the same. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Marissa, you have talent! Keep writing! I hope this guy proves everyone else wrong. Good luck with him and welcome to Passions! Elizabeth "Boys and girls together, me and Mamie O'Rourke Tripped the light fantastic on the sidewalks of New York." |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Welcome to Passions  ! You do have talent. And as far as this guy goes, don't be afraid to give him a chance. People said the same things about my boyfriend and we have been together for fifteen months, no one thought it would last any longer than a week. If he does break your heart, use it as a learning experience. Yes it hurts, but you will heal with time. Keep up the good work, hope to see more from you soon .~Susie~ |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
NO!!! marissa... Please feel welcome and please dont be shy we hope to become your 2nd home and that you never say goodbye... just alittle something i wrote for ya...hope you like it!! |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions! Keep reading and writting. For a first attempt this is well done. You express yourself well. Don't be afraid to experiment and try to broaden your writting.Mairlyn. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wonderful work, do take the chance with him. Welcome To Passions!  *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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