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Teen Poetry #2

a light in the attic

NaTaLy
Junior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 43
brooklyn,ny,usa

0 posted 1999-12-27 09:09 PM

what do you see,
when you look at me?
a bitter mean old hag
i can hear you mumble under your breathe
i have ears
as well as a heart
whom once beat to an invisible tune
always a smile on my lips
innocense surrounding me
now what?
a shell of vibrant young soul thats long gone.

and its all your fault.

n.m.

starboards
Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

1 posted 1999-12-27 11:46 PM

I'm suprised no one else has responded to this great poem, but who is this aimed at?? Just curious, i like to know why poets write about their chosen subjects, great poem!

Ashley

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