Teen Poetry #2 |
A poem 'bout my dad |
Anette New Member
since 1999-12-23
Posts 4 |
This is a poem I just wrote about my dad, and I have no idea why I posted it here. I have never been good at writing poems, but I wanted to find a poem to my mon since it's christmas eve tomorrow and I wanted to give her something special. And then I ended up writing a poem about my dad..... I'm 18 years old and I'm from Norway (I guess that explains why my english sux...) Anyway, here's the poem I really hope some of you will read it, and maybe even like it...... I wonder why I had to wait so long to get that special hug again, why it took so long to give me that attencion. I wonder why the only attencion you gave me was gifts, why you couldn’t just give me such a simple thing as some of your time. I wonder why you never seem to remember what I like to eat and what I don’t, why you can’t try to ask me what I like instead of always guessing. I wonder why you ask me to tell you what’s going on in my life, why you ask when you never listen when I sit down to talk. I wonder why you never get mad at me when I yell and say mean things, why you seem afraid to talk to me in the fear of doing something wrong. I wonder why I always get mad at you for simple little things that aren’t your fault, why you never get sick of me blaming you for everything. I wonder why I still blame you for not being there for me when I was a kid, why I just can’t forget about it and be happy for the things you do for me now. I wonder why I can’t tell you all the things I want to, why I can’t be the daughter you want. I wonder why I need such long time to forgive, why I blame you for everything. I wonder if you know how sorry I am for making you sad every day, why I do this I don’t know I guess I just need some time. I wonder if you know how much I love you.... ~*Anette*~ |
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Olga Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152Brooklyn, NY, USA |
I honestly really liked your poem. I understand that no1 likes to be hurt. And everyone needs time 2 forgive and forget. I don't blame u. Keep it up. |
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Tina TT Junior Member
since 1999-11-01
Posts 45Victoria, Australia |
I really liked it, very honest....and your english is fine |
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Blue Eyed Wanderer Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 84Rhode Island, US |
Forgiving takes time, but you can never forget. I know what having a father like that is like. You portrayed the emotions involved nicely. *hugs* ~Jess~ |
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