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Teen Poetry #2

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StratMatt
Member

since 1999-09-19

Posts 87
Macomb, IL, U.S.A.

0 posted 1999-10-11 01:45 AM

Soaring high above the clouds
The view seems so grand
A world so beautiful
for it holds you

You with your beautiful face
your beautiful eyes
your beautiful skin
your beautiful smile

shining so bright
it combats the sun.
Bringing light to my heart
bringing light to my world.

As I watch from afar
I wonder what it'd be like
If your radiance were mine
What would become of it?

So I sit here and dream
with a smile on my face.
As your beauty inspires me
To keep pushing on.

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"Lost time is never found again." -Ben Franklin.

Silent Silver
Junior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 12
AZ, USA

1 posted 1999-10-11 02:57 PM

This poem really makes one smile.

I think it's wonderful when you are in love with someone so much that it motivates you to keep going and have a positive outlook on things. Great!

-SS

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

2 posted 1999-10-12 11:57 PM

If your radiance were mine
What would become of it?

I can really relate to that line
Great poem

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

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