Teen Poetry #2 |
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Why me? |
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Maitay Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 158Sisters,OR,USA |
I have given up me given away all that cant be given back. I miss you we dont talk. I need you to be near me you listened once to all my concerns. You made me smile, you were my friend. Now everyone disipates leaving me alone. Are you leaving too or will you be strong and help me? What would we do if we created another, someone who would need us, need us more then we need each other. My other friend, he's controled by the evil HER. HE hates me cause she does this pains me - I still care for him. Gone are all my happy thoughts the divorce has taken them away. Mom and dad faighting through me, and then the situation with you. People spread rumors about us, wishing to knock us down. I have a new shield, being a bitch. Everyone hate me, then I cant get hurt. Leave me alone to cry only stay if you really care. Dont get personal if you not my freind love me for who I am and what I do. Dont condemn me for being human, you are too. This dont make much sence but I am going through a really rough time right now. My parents are getting a divorce, all my freinds are mad at me becuase of some stupid lies told about me, and someone I care about alot, and gave my heart to, well... we are in an akward possition right now. But I will smile cuase thats a start to making things good again. ~The price of finding love is to eventually lose it. When I wish on a falling star, I wish not for material goods but to show kindness to others and be content with what the world may offer me~ ~Maitay Mirabel Litton~ |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
The poem does make sense. And i wish you all the luck that things work out. Just hang in there, things do eventually turn out for the better. |
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
It makes plenty of sense. Best of luck in getting your life straightened out, and keep that smile on your face! It will help! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Nail to the mast her holy flag, Set every threadbare sail- And give her to the god of storms, The lightning and the gale! -Oliver Wendell Holmes |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
This does make sence..nice work, and good luck to you. ![]() *Krista Knutson* "I can feel you breathe, it's washing over me, and suddenly I'm melting into you..." ~Faith Hill: Breathe~ |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Keep your head up...think about this..it cant get any worse, right?? so smile k??? Well, i like this poem and like everyone has said...it does make sense to anyone that's ever been in your situation! ![]() Starboards ************************* "You will see a lot of things, But they will mean nothing to you If you lose sight of the thing you love." -from the movie "At First Site" ************************* |
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Piggy New Member
since 1999-10-25
Posts 5Belleville, IL, USA |
I think that is one of the best poems i have ever heard. Remeber that bad things happen to everyone and you just happen to be getting a lot of them at once. Deal with them each indivisualy and it will bring you satisfaction. **The only man worth your tears will never make you cry!!** |
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