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Master
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since 1999-08-18
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Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-12-12 07:19 PM


Be still my heart, your beating is too loud
It may awake the Gods, who’ve missed my deed
Instead, beat calmly, make the pale proud
And pave uncertainty with densely thick concrete
Let eyes reflect not what they saw tonight
But, rather shine with glory that they’ve chased
Let time be counterfeited in my sight
And happiness be mimicked on my face
Fair heart, digest your inner feelings
As if a cyclone that consumes brave ships
Let no debris arise in any dealings
The safest lie is that which always sleeps
By doing so, don’t let observers see
The secret that is known to you and me



 I fell in love and kept on falling


© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
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1 posted 1999-12-13 11:30 AM


Ahh yet again you steal my breath young Sir. Your talent is boundless. I wish others would read more of your work. You have a fan in me.  
Master
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2 posted 1999-12-13 09:41 PM


Thank you Marylin, as for others reading my work, "I don't want to be popular, I just want to be loved..." One of my favorite quotes by a close friend.
Alwye
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In the space between moments
3 posted 1999-12-13 10:19 PM


I must say, you've gained a fan here.  You have incredible talent.  I indeed love it.  

 *Krista Knutson*

"I can feel you breathe, it's washing over me, and suddenly I'm melting into you..." ~Faith Hill: Breathe~


Master
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4 posted 1999-12-13 10:55 PM


Thank you Alwye, a good fan is hard to find nowadays!
Marilyn
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5 posted 1999-12-14 10:22 AM


It is not for popularity that I made the statement above. The more we read good poetry the more we learn. How can we grow in our passions if we do not see well written pieces?
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