Teen Poetry #2 |
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Perfect is you |
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Kevin![]()
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa ![]() |
Nobody’s perfect, a fact we must face. We've all had those times, we wished to replace. And too many lies, I've had to go through, to finally realize, That perfect is you. I’ve seen many days, Watched them pass me by. Been lost in the haze, Till you caught my eye. Drowning in wrong, with one glance I knew, after searching so long that perfect is you. disappointment expected, a daily emotion. Attraction neglected, a useless commotion. A life that was gray, saw flashes of hue, ever since the day, that perfect was you. |
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eagle Junior Member
since 1999-10-20
Posts 39singapore |
A wonderful poem! =) The rhyming's perfect! cool ![]() |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Quite exellent work, Kevin! Man, I'd melt if someone wrote something like this for me. Actually, someone does..but anyway, this is wonderful work! You have such talent, do keep it up! ![]() ![]() ![]() *Krista Knutson* "I can feel you breathe, it's washing over me, and suddenly I'm melting into you..." ~Faith Hill: Breathe~ |
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Allysa![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Your poem is very touching. I really liked it. For once in my life, I'm at a loss for words. Please read my poem, Texas Land. I wrote it for my great-grandpa who passed away this week. you're very talented. Live a life of happiness!!! |
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