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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA 
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I swear to God, Sometimes I just want to fly off the handle, Scratch you face Bruise you body Break your bones. Sometimes I think you aren't pretending. That this isn't a game or maybe I could win. But this game is controled by the house. Like blackjack, roulette, russian roulette. One bullet, six chamber. Do you want to die? Do you care to meet you maker? A twisted God is he? Did you hide it well? Well, we can't all be perfect. So cut me some slack buddy c'mon you know you want to fall in L*ve. Don't say that nasty word!!! You need you mouth washed out with soap. Someday you too will know I care only about me, An that's how is should be So if you fall in L*ve I'll break your heart so that you never make that mistake again. C'mon inside, We'll play a game see who takes the wrong step first who loses their heart. Are you going up against me? Are you stupid? Oh, I see! You think you can make me fall in L*ve with you. Anything is possible, I guess. But if I get in first You lose heart, soul and mind. You think it's worth the risk? So give in a try Step inside, My twisted mind. |
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april_dawn_h New Member
since 1999-12-10
Posts 9southern California |
Ummmmm....sure. Are you ok dude? |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
jer ~ i dig this poem... you have some good thoughts in your poetry... this is going to be a response to all the poems you've posted (since there are quite a few of them and i'm too lazy to respond to each one)... i think it's awesome to see a teenage poet writing about something other than lost-loves and teen-struggles... i applaud you on your ability to look beyond the confinement of adolescence and write about social and philosophic issues... as for this poem in particular, though i dont agree with the sentiment of the speaker, i like the poem itself... sincerely, **jerome the boy with no brain |
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