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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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I called you last night, I felt so alone. i called you last night, thinking you were home. I called you to tell you, I'm sorry, goodbye. I called you to tell you, I wanted to die. I've called you before, I'll never call you again. I can't call you now, I'm gone, It's the end. if you would have picked up, this might not have happened. If you would have talked, my parents might not be saddend. I won't you to know, you really did care. I want you to know, you were always there. I want you to know, I really did love you. I want you to know, I never stood above you. You were a good lover, You were a good friend, It just was time, for my life to end. ---------------------------------------------------- I remeber crying, but not knowing why. I remember someone hugging me, but I don't remeber who. And someone told me that it was you. My love. --------------------------------------------------- Don't ask me, I don't know why I wrote that. |
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blewaway5 Junior Member
since 1999-12-09
Posts 10 |
It's kind of sad, really. If there is one thing in this life I won't tolerate it is waste, and that is all that suicide is. I've known three people so far who have killed themselves, all of them close friends. All three of those individuals had more talent in themselves at any given moment than could ever have. I hate them for not carrying on, but I still love them for who they were. I just wish they knew how much they had to offer. Thanks for the poem. --blewaway5 |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
hunny.. if you thinkin about suicide.. itz not worth it... i tried.. cuz i thought it was.. and i'm glad i failed cuz i realized it wasnt worth it... and if you are not thinkin about it.. then u did a good job at creatively writing  Don't Fall.. Rise in Love -------823------- |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
i cant count the number of times ive felt this way, but i just try to make it to the morning and somehow everything rights itself i love this poem though its a testiment to how painful life can be but a reminder that it can only get better |
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Innocent_Bystander Junior Member
since 1999-12-05
Posts 15 |
well, That was a powerful poem....I really enjoyed reading it...but hun do not try to commit suicide it's not worth it....I say grab life in your hand and all the choices can be yours or something like that, but, it will get better. Any man can make a baby, But only a real man can take care of his children. ~Unknown~ |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I'm not thinking about comiting suicide. The thought has never once crossed my mind. Don't be worried. I just write stuff not from my expirences, but from others and things I've read. |
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angel baby New Member
since 1999-12-06
Posts 4 |
I am so glad that you aren't thinking about suicide... Life is the greatest thing that can ever happen to you, and unlike other things, once you take that away, there is no turning back. very good poem.. you are a very talented writer.. keep it up! take care... |
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