Teen Poetry #2 |
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As time is pouring from the bottle... |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA ![]() |
As time is pouring from the bottle Last drops of wine into my glass, Let’s enter through the liquid puddle I’m sure that there’s a place for us. Among the clouds’ confusing patterns, We’ll find the room to build a home And live together- that’s what matters- We’ll live together all alone! And in the backyard, in our garden, We’ll plant the stars and everyday, Our dreams will grow with fervent ardor And lap the mild Milky Way We’ll live without a single worry Enthralled in happiness and love Let all the people read our story While gazing at us from above This dream to me has been so thrilling That even now, I’m still amazed. And water’s dripping from the ceiling Into my glass and on my face. |
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JEBE Junior Member
since 1999-11-02
Posts 32WILMINGTON, NC, USA |
WOW...THATS ABOUT ALL I CAN SAY...YOUR VIEWS ARE AMAZING ..AND HOW YOU CAN PUT DEEP MATTERS INTO ELEGANT WORDS THAT WIND TOGETHER BRAVO... ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() JEBE |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thanks Jebe! You've just defined a poet... *S* |
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