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Jer
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since 1999-12-02
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0 posted 1999-12-08 04:00 PM



Deep within,
There is a pool of feelings.
A place of eternal peace.
You believe me to be unhappy.
But you have been deceived...
That sadness what I feed upon is my
Hope, my salvation.
This pool is my salvation
All I must do is jump.

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JEBE
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since 1999-11-02
Posts 32
WILMINGTON, NC, USA
1 posted 1999-12-08 05:31 PM


ITS HURT AND SADNESS WHICH TEACHES THE WORLD TO BE STRONG...EACH PERSON IN THEIR OWN WAY JUMPS INTO THEIR POOL OF SALVATION WITHOUT REALIZING IT . I LOVE IT HOW YOU PUT IT IN THOSE WORDS...
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