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Teen Poetry #2

Flicker

poetry_kills
Senior Member

since 1999-12-04

Posts 549
new orleans

0 posted 1999-12-07 03:02 PM

Flicker

                            i
                          lit a
                          candle
                       the other day
                     to light the room
                    because the sun had
                      gone to bed and
                      the candle said
                           to me
                           "ouch,
                            that
                        hurt  –  you
                      burned my hair!"
                     "i'm sorry" said i,
                      "i did not know!"
                      "not know indeed,
                      when you stick a
                      flame to my head!"
                    so i lit my hair upon
                    fire.  "you are right
                  little flame – it hurts."

[This message has been edited by poetry_kills (edited 12-07-1999).]

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

1 posted 1999-12-07 04:26 PM

Good poem. Very enteresting concept. What am I talking about? It was a good poem check out some of my poems sometime. Okay?

~Red~
Junior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 36
chicago, Ill-na, u.s.a.

2 posted 1999-12-11 12:27 PM

ah! very interesting indeed, i liked it lotts...good work! keep on writing!

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