Teen Poetry #2 |
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Untitled (Need Some Sugg.) |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA ![]() |
What have I done to deserve this fate? This hell on earth that fellow humans have conveniently built around me. With every dishonest action, The flames grew stronger. They have yet to reach me. Though I feel them closing in on me. Frighteningly fast! I'm scared and am alone, Or am I scared to be alone? Was this hell of mine created by my own paranoia? The fright of being alone and never finding anyone to be close to and as a result pushing them away. If this is in fact a figment of my imagination... Then only I can find my way out. |
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Rachel_A Member
since 1999-11-30
Posts 70North Webster, IN USA |
The topic of this poem is really good, and I think one that a lot of us can relate to!! |
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JEBE Junior Member
since 1999-11-02
Posts 32WILMINGTON, NC, USA |
YOU DON'T NEED SUGGESTIONS...YOUR BRAVE FOR LETTING PEOPLE TRULY SEE INTO YOUR SOUL AND BY WRITING YOUR ALSO GETTING TO KNOW YOURSELF EVEN BETTER...I APPLAUD...POETRY ISN'T ABOUT WHO HAS THE BEST POEM ITS ABOUT FEELINGS YOU WANNA SHARE WITH THE WORLD ![]() ![]() |
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