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Forgot Me(Please respond!)
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Forgot Me(Please respond!) |
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chollagrl4 Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 65brick |
Forgotten words your lips once said, forgotten lovers in your bed. Love once had meaning, gave me hope. Now I lay here and try to cope. I do not feel the cold hard floor, I can not feel, its my heart you tore. Forgotten hugs and kisses from you, you'll never know, this pain im going through. You were the only one, and will always be. The only one that truly loved me. Forgotten promises, forgotten fears, I lay here now and swallow my tears. Now that I wish to die, u have no tears, your face is dry. |
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kari Member
since 1999-10-03
Posts 104Hyde Park, Ut, USA |
You must have written this while you were crying because you can feel it. I hate the feeling of hopelessness when all you can do is cry. For whatever reason God puts us girls through all this crap- it better be for a good reason.  Awesome. |
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Tal Junior Member
since 1999-10-05
Posts 27Singapore |
Now wait a minute. It's not only the girls that go through stuff like this ya know. Jeez, us guys.. well most guys.. or some guys.. well maybe just me.. um.. well I go throught stuff like this too... chollagrl, I really like your poetry... because it's very written in my situation... |
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Angie New Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 3KY |
i love the poem. i can relate to it. i know how you feel. i hate that feeling. Angela |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
God...i love your poem...i can totally relate to it and that's a good quality in a poem...but i know it hurts though because i'm just getting over being forgotten myself...once again...great poem!! |
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