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Singer1981
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since 1999-12-02
Posts 148
Fredonia, NY USA
0 posted 1999-12-05 12:20 PM

This is a new kind of poem for me...something other than love or guys or hating life...enjoy!

The sun peeks slowly over the horizon,
hesitating, as if unsure of the time
The robin hops along the ground, newly wet
with dew
The flowers are beginning to open, displaying
their beauty
The brilliant red of the rose stands out
against the brightening blue
The moon and stars have gone with the night
sky.
© Copyright 1999 Sarah Goldstein - All Rights Reserved
JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
1 posted 1999-12-06 03:13 PM

Awesome!  Continue writing more different kinds of poetry.  It will definetly broaden your skills and horizens.  This one was great.  

 JOY
Singer1981
Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148
Fredonia, NY USA
2 posted 1999-12-06 03:20 PM

Thanks Joy!  I appreciate any comments!
kari
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since 1999-10-03
Posts 104
Hyde Park, Ut, USA
3 posted 1999-12-06 06:51 PM

I like the picture idea.  It's cute.  The poem was also well depicted.  Nice job!  
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