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Goodnight to Love
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Goodnight to Love |
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Rachel_A Member
since 1999-11-30
Posts 70North Webster, IN USA |
When you go to sleep at night what do you think of? Do you think of the ocean wide or the stars above? Do you think of a TV show or a girl at your school? Or do you think of our love and how you broke the rule? You broke my heart right in two But when I go to sleep I think of you. |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
"because when i got to sleep i think of you" great emotions...i like this one alot! ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
i love how your poems all come around to a ending-kicker line.. its a great scheme... great job on this one also.. ------------------ Don't Fall.. Rise in Love -------823------- |
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