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Jer
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since 1999-12-02
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0 posted 1999-12-02 03:11 PM



What do you think they would say
If I stood up and I walked away?
Nobody here really understand me
and so I'll wave goodbye just leave me be.
A little bird once came by my side,
said you don't know the way I'm living and I’ll never confide,
you don't like me
A little bird once told me,
And so I'll wave goodbye.
"I'm flying away now-I'm fine" I’ll say with a sigh. And I always thought this would be
The land of opportunities
But I came to find out that it's all just greed, hate and money.
I'll be the last in your life,
so I'll fade away
I said you’re on your own
Your always going
The wrong way,
All my friends patronize me and
They say to me in my dreams
"Have you found what your looking for?"
It seems they don't really know me
I'm just me and it appears to be
All that they can't see.

© Copyright 1999 Jeremy Snyder - All Rights Reserved
Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
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1 posted 1999-12-02 10:40 PM


ooh man..you've hit my feelings on the head..this is exellent, do keep up the great work!

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*Krista Knutson*

"When you start falling, who's gonna catch ya? I'm willing to betcha, it will be me." ~Faith Hill: It will be me~


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