In love with one who loves another (repost from open 3)

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In love with one who loves another (repost from open 3)

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

0 posted 1999-12-01 04:31 PM

well guys,
ive decided that i dont participate nealy enough in this forum and i probably belong here more than anywhere else so i decided to repost my old poems that i think you can identify with, ill be participating here alot more in the future

cheated by my own emotions,
certain your the only one,
drowning in your endless oceans,
waves of remorse flood my sun.
perfect every moment shared,
but moments you don’t want with me,
when I told you that I cared,
you told me we could never be.
I know that you do love another,
my feelings still I can't deny,
compare myself to the favored other,
wonder why he caught your eye.
choking on my self brought sorrow,
I gasp for air you suffocate me,
my only hope lies in tomorrow,
to shine some light you did not see.

[This message has been edited by Kevin (edited 12-01-1999).]

sweethaert14
New Member

since 1999-11-24

Posts 9
west,ca,us

1 posted 1999-12-01 07:44 PM

i know exactly how you feel i am going through the same sitution right know

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

2 posted 1999-12-01 11:13 PM

I've been there myself, Kevin. Exellent work!

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*Krista Knutson*

"When you start falling, who's gonna catch ya? I'm willing to betcha, it will be me." ~Faith Hill: It will be me~

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